IF I WAS THE LEAD IN A FANTASY NOVEL, I'd help my own family instead of
strangers around the world the way my character Liliha does with visions in
Still Rock Water.
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Living in England and unable to travel. I'd like to
transport to their side in a flash each time they call for help. A heroine
could do that. Only once, does Liliha contact her daughter during a vision. Here's what happened:
With the release of control, her long sigh became a
kind of meditation. Icy spray misted her cheeks. Water roared toward her like a
tsunami. The charge sucked her breath away. When a bright flash appeared, she
tightened her hand around her ring. Something about the darkness clouding her vision and the familiar scent, caused shivers of
apprehension ahead of her swirl through the tunnel.
* * * *
A shock jolts through me, sending my mind into panic.
I see through my own daughter's eyes. I'm with Alissa in the school grounds,
playing on the hockey field. I'm stupefied at what will go wrong for her. Draw
back. I've got to disengage from personal worry and concentrate.
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Bully tactics! I gasp.
The ball rolls our way over the grass. Running toward
it with our stick poised, one leg catches on the bottom of her new shin-guard.
We fall onto our side with a thud, winded. Rene runs full tilt toward us.
I watch with horror as a stick slices toward Alissa's
eye. She must move ... and fast. I use all the mental force in my power to make
her roll.
The stick comes down on the side of her head with a
thud. Unable to move, she lies immobile. Although the injury isn't serious,
blinding pain sears through her. She won't sob in front of Rene, but she's
stunned, unable to work out how she could have moved with such speed.
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I'm undecided about warning Alissa against admiring
Rene. I don't like the scenario, but she must make her own decisions.
As I dissolve, the other girls run across to Alissa,
and then make way for the adults.
* * * *
A cry came from Liliha's lips. Her earlier visions
had never been personal. ...
Of course, we're all not visionaries. Nor do we wield
swords or perform magic tricks. We're just ordinary human beings, trying to
cope as best we can with the events around us. If you were a heroine, what particular
power would you want?
Hmm... the ability to be everywhere at once and to solve every problem quickly.
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Shelly
great writing and quite exciting. I was holding my breath. I think the power of teleportation would be cool - just zoom in person to wherever one is needed. After that, ummm, hopefully I have other powers too, so solve issues.
ReplyDeleteI'd like Jedi powers... the power of persuasion. To be used only for good of course.
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